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    Person in history industrial revolution Aoife_gethings

    Need help writing bout a worker in a factory during the industrial revolution.

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      I'll give you 8 headings for your 8 paragraphs . Each paragraph must contain at least 3 significant relevant statements :

      1) Describe the factory

      2/3) Rules and fines ( you can fit this into 2 paragraphs if you like )

      4) Their houses

      5) sicknesses / diseases

      6) the 3 reasons based on governments reports on why to improve housing conditions

      7) Robert Owen - ( talk about him and his factory )

      8). Where did your children go to on Sunday ( Sunday school ) and did they have education everyday ? Talk about food that the POOR people ate ( because your writing as your a poor person ) and write about the pastimes / leisure activities that existed at that time.

      Good luck on writing it !

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      thankyou !!

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      do u write it like a diary entry as a poor person or in the third person ?

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      I wouldn't call it a diary entry bcus your

      Not saying dear diary ..... . It's a people in history account. You can say " I " work in a factory and its 4/5 storeys tall... And when your talking about Robert Owen you can say - " I heard about a man from Scotland and his name was ....

      Hope that helps !

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