- P is for purpose – am I answering the question asked?
- C is for coherence – am I linking my responses coherently.
- L is the marks awarded for language, ‘lively phrasing’, vocabulary, syntax etc.
- M is for mechanics, spelling and grammar.
Purpose, coherence and Language are all 30% of the essay's marks and the remaining 10% is for mechanics.
In terms of revision firstly, you must practice planning sample exam questions, look at past exam papers, mock papers and your textbook for the type of questions that come up about Heaney. Often the questions can centre on the idea that in Heaney’s work he manages to convey the universal in the ordinary. If we look at the 2021 question it is a version of this idea; it states on Heaney ‘transforms the familiar and mundane through his powerful use of language, thereby enabling us to learn a range of profound lessons from his poetry’. This is essentially asking you to outline all the ordinary things Heaney writes about but then examine the greater themes he extracts from these familiar things. Go through your poems and do a very quick one line per poem plan. This will prepare you to adjust your studied notes to suit the question on the day of the Leaving Cert. One of the biggest mistakes students make is just writing down all the notes they can remember without properly referencing the question asked. Here are some examples of how to plan the 2021 answer very quickly so it’s focused on the question:
‘The Forge’ – the familiar is the blacksmith and forge, the ‘lesson’ is about valuing artistic creativity.
‘A Constable Calls’ – the familiar is the Constable doing his job, the lesson is about oppression and division in the North from a child’s perspective.
‘A Call’ – the familiar is making a phone call to his father, the lesson or theme is the realisation of our parent’s mortality, our love for them.
‘Postscript’ – the familiar, a beautiful landscape, the lesson or theme is the transience of life, and artistic inspiration.
‘Tate’s Avenue’ – the familiar, sitting on a rug with his wife, the theme – the different the stages of romantic love.
And so on.
Secondly, when you have practiced gearing your notes towards sample questions write a sample essay and go over the essay with a highlighter. Any time you see a word of poetic terminology or a quote from the poet, highlight it. By poetic terminology I mean; theme, image, simile, metaphor, personification, all the sound techniques; alliteration, assonance, sibilance, onomatopoeia, or words like hyperbole, contrast etc. If your essay is covered in highlighter you are on track for a H1!
So to conclude, I hope you’ve enjoyed the podcast, Heaney is certainly a poetic tour de force, his language is beautiful and his themes are universally appealing. He is a fantastic poet to focus in on for the exam, so the very best of luck!